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PostSubject: Red Comet (Custom Npc for White Giant)   Red Comet (Custom Npc for White Giant) I_icon_minitimeWed May 30, 2012 10:52 pm
Name: Red Comet
Legion: Red

Stats: Health - 4000
Mana - 200
Attack - 330
Defence - 350
Speed - 350
Intellegence - 275
agility/dexterity - 300

Reward:1100 BP

Bonuses: Plus 25% to defense

Post Req: Minimum of 10 Posts at 90 Words


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PostSubject: Re: Red Comet (Custom Npc for White Giant)   Red Comet (Custom Npc for White Giant) I_icon_minitimeWed May 30, 2012 11:14 pm
To be honest, I don't know how im going to grade that. Sorry, but im passing it over to the others on this one.
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PostSubject: Re: Red Comet (Custom Npc for White Giant)   Red Comet (Custom Npc for White Giant) I_icon_minitimeWed May 30, 2012 11:32 pm
"Bonuses: Plus 35% to defense and +200 to attack stat"
In my opinion, that bonus is too much.
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PostSubject: Re: Red Comet (Custom Npc for White Giant)   Red Comet (Custom Npc for White Giant) I_icon_minitimeWed May 30, 2012 11:59 pm
The bonus is too high, Lower the bonus and instead of two put one instead.
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PostSubject: Re: Red Comet (Custom Npc for White Giant)   Red Comet (Custom Npc for White Giant) I_icon_minitimeThu May 31, 2012 2:25 pm
any better?
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PostSubject: Re: Red Comet (Custom Npc for White Giant)   Red Comet (Custom Npc for White Giant) I_icon_minitimeThu May 31, 2012 2:42 pm
Make it 12 posts and I'll approve.

100 points per post= 11 posts.
1 Post Extra= For 1 Bonus
3 Post Extra= For 2 Bonus.

15 Posts Req.

Take out one of the bonuses. Either 25% defense or 100 to each stat. I would go with the 25% if I were you. If you really want two bonuses I would it would be 15 Post.
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